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喜讯：2016年高考真题——英语（江苏卷） 书面表达 共命中25分2016-07-09 9:51:00　阅读 次 参与讨论()

喜讯：2016年高考真题——英语（江苏卷）书面表达  共命中25分

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【高考真题】

第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）

请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 -3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【答案】

Possible version one:

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

(150 words)

Possible version two:

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it.

In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

(150 words)

【命中试题】

【天津市河北区2016届高三总复习质量检测（一）英语试卷  书面表达】

http://ks5u.com/down/2016-5/2/2127589.shtml

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

61.近年来，微信（WeChat）成为人们日常生活中必不可少的通讯工具，尤其在今年春节期间，“微信抢红包”热（“Red envelope” fever）风靡全国。请对这一现象写一篇短文，内容包括以下几点：

（1）使用微信的利与弊。

（2）自己的看法和建议。

要求：

(1)词数：100词左右。

(2)开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

In recent years, WeChat is becoming increasingly popular._______________

【答案】

In recent years, WeChat is becoming increasingly popular. “Red envelope” fever has swept the country especially during this Spring Festival.

There are many reasons for WeChat to be known. To begin with, WeChat is a relatively cheap way of communication, which cuts down the cost of making a phone call. Next, WeChat is to the taste of the majority of people with the various functions; it is available everywhere at any time.

However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. Finally, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on work.

There is some doubt that WeChat will improve as time goes by.