短文改错专练
(一)
(2015哈六中高一下期中)
after school, i was about to enter my apartment while i saw a little dirty dog lie beside a dustbin. he looked extremely weak. immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. so i decided to take him home. i gave him some food and a bath. after the bath he looked energy and refreshed. what a lovely dog!
when my parents got to home, i asked that i could keep the dog. to my surprised and joy, they agreed. up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company.
looked at the cute and happy dog today, i realize that i was right to help him.
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after school, i was about to enter my apartment whilewhen i saw a little dirty dog lielying beside a dustbin. he looked extremely weak. immediately the homeless dog filled me ofwith sympathy. so i decided to take him home. i gave him some food and a bath. after the bath he looked energyenergetic and refreshed. what a lovely dog!
when my parents got to home, i asked thatif/whether i could keep the dog. to my surprisedsurprise and joy, they agreed. up to now, he has become∧a member of our family and everyone hadhas enjoyed his company.
lookedlooking at the cute and happy dog today, i realize that i was right to help him.
(二)
(2015•南阳市高一下学期期中)
i as well as my family are going to new york city this weekend. i had been looking forward to go there for a long time. it is one of the modern city in the world. there have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school. i'd also like to see the statue of liberty and the empire state building. unfortunately, the twins towers destroyed on september 11th, 2001 and i would have the chance to see them by myself. now i am getting ready for the excited trip. i bet it will be a unforgettable experience.
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